Sincerity heart

Hey guys :D this is Aiman.This time I will make sad story just Ili said,so....I m little bit pain to do this because actually,.... I m not good at this.The story start beginning here.....
This is a story about a poor little girl.Her name is Lula.She is ten years old .She born from a poor family.Everyday,they just eating a plate of white rice and salt.

"I m so jealous with other my friends,every month they get a new school uniform......unfortunately,I m not.I have no parent.,they rich but I........"Lula said while crying

"Oh Lula....don't say that...we must work hard if we want to be rich like them.Especially like you.You must study hard to get a best score in exam.I know...you didn't want life in this living...I always in beside you okay?I will work hard for your money spend.I just wanna you be happy. Don't cry my dear....."her brother say with full of love..

3 years later........

Last year,Lula had faced the UPSR examination.She got 8 A's include Arab language,Mandarin language and Tamil language.Afterward,Malaysia government had give Lula a big house . Now,she are rich .Lula so happy because in my class,I only the that have a big house.My life does not like before.Now,I cant buy everything I want.....

"Hey idiot!!! sweep that floor cleanly!!!If you want to keep staying in my house...you must DO YOUR WORK!!! UNDERSTAND!!!"Lula saying to her brother rudely while sprinkling her hot coffee to his face.

"I m so sorry......."he answer tremblingly...

situation becoming worse because Lula forget herself from where she is born from actually......

next day later.........

Her brother had broken her new expensive glass accidentally during he wiping that vase because of slipping over floor .......Lula just bought it from high class furniture shop called 'Lorenzo' yesterday. She just know that thing happening now so, she pull her brother's ear painfully and said...

"Hey stupid!why you always want to make my heart hurt huh!!!I don't wanna see your face in my house anymore!!!now!!!GET OUT FROM MY HOUSE!!!! "and she end her speak with push her brother head roughly!!

Her brother now is old,so he not useful to fight his sister back,so he just follow what his beloved sister say, to get out from her house now without saying something and crying sobbingly.........

The situation becomes more sad and lonely........ (T_T)........ suddenly!!!!!

"Kaaapppooowwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!"sound came from out her house

"OH MY GOD!!!"Lula shock

Then,Lula trying to look her back and you know?his brother just accident lately,It seems that his condition is very critical!!!his body is full of his red blood....and Lula ran toward his brother quickly and then she said to her brother cryingly...

"Say something Aiman!!!....."Lula said

"I love you my dear....you still in my heart....always in my heart...."Aiman replied sobbingly....

" Aiman!!!!...."Lula shouted

"Goodbye. . . . . . . . . . . . . . ." Aiman replied for his final pulling breath....

THE END

Unbearable - Sad

Dan here~ Well, here's another one of my sucky stories. Hope you enjoy~

 I've lost everything near and dear to me… And I can't stand it. Everything I do, be it breathing or walking always tires me out. I can't think straight and I'm afraid it's driving me crazy. My beloved family always looms back in my mind, happy smiles on their faces, laughing. Their giggles were unbearable to listen to. Those chuckles were the last thing I heard from them. And then they were gone. No one had expected them to pass on. And I'm still in shock.

 "Em, you okay?" my dear friend, Robin woke me up from my small daydream.

 I mutter back a response, my voice barely a whisper, "Yes,"

 I dip my head, not meeting his gaze. He had done so much for me. Out of everyone, he was the one that worked the hardest to track down the murderers. I didn't want him to see me down. Robin took a seat next to me and gave me a pat on the back, "You feeling down?"

 My eyes watered slightly as I shake my head. How could I tell him? I didn't want to burden him anymore. I tried my best to come up with a reasonable excuse, "Robin, I have a fever. That's all. I'm going to take my medicine now,"

 I stand to my feet, my head still down. Tears were streaming down my face. God, I must look like a mess now. I take one step…. And then I felt Robin firmly grip my hand. His voice was soft and comforting as he said, "Em, it's okay if you're still feeling down. It's natural for people to mourn over the death of their loved ones,"

 For a moment, we stood silent, my brain slowly processing what Robin had said. Sure, mourning was natural and all that crap but no matter how much I mourned, I never got any better. Every tear I release had no effect, every second I spent remembering them didn't do any good; it only made me sick. I raise my head and stare at Robin with my tired, depressed eyes, "Please Robin, it's been two flipping months. The media have forgotten all about the murder, all my friends have stopped talking about it, heck even the police are not bothering with the case any longer,"

 Robin looked up at my confused eyes, "But I'm here, Em. I'll always be here for you no matter what. You need to forget about what the rest of the world thinks. The rest of the world is stupid! Just-"

 I couldn't take it. His words…. They were just too much for me to bear. I tug my arm away from him and run away. He follows me, his voice frantic, "Em, come back!"

 More tears flow. I couldn't. He just didn't understand my situation even though he tried to. I rush over to my right where I could see a door with a label on it. It read 'STAIRS'. My heart throbbed when I knew what I had to do to cure myself. It was the only way. As I rushed up one flight of stairs, Robin seemed to understand. "No, Em! Suicide isn't the way!"

 I made myself deaf, trying not to listen to his every pleading word. He couldn't disturb me. This is what I have to do. As I rush up another flight of stairs, I trip over one of the steps. And as soon as I did, I could feel the warm touch of Robin's hand as he hugged me close. He sobbed, "Em, it's going to be all right,"

 I nibble my bottom lip. It would never. "Robin, don't you understand!? It'll never be freaking all right. If I get back to my usual life, I'll just keep suffering from missing them but if I…. If I killed myself, I could see my family again. I want to see them badly. I want to hug each and every member and I want to spend good times with them. Just leave me alone,"

 Robin hugged me tighter, "No Em, you can't leave me. Please! Can't you see that I love you?"

 Time paused. My heart throbbed. He was in love with me!? I began remembering memories from a long time ago. Back when we were just kids without anything to worry about. He had always stuck up for me when no one else would, he had always cheered me up when I was down, helped me when I needed it…. He was a good friend. But I never thought he felt this way for me. "Em, will you please help me….?" he pleaded, his eyes teary.

I could only just say one thing. "I'm sorry," I mutter as I force him to lose his grip on me and then push him down the stairs. I truly was sorry. As soon as he fell, I continued to run. I needed to get on the rooftop quickly before anyone could interrupt.

 And I could still hear someone pattering up the stairs, frantically calling my name. Oh God, Robin must really care for me…. But no, this is what I have to do! In front of me, I could see what I had long desired; a large yellow door with the word 'ROOFTOP' above it. A crazy smile appears on my face. Mum, dad, bro, I'm coming!

 I push the door back with great force, clearly excited. Finally, my pains would be over. I can only hope that Robin can cope with what he's going to face. Robin…. More fresh tears drip from my eyes. But I knew I couldn't stop, I had already made it this far. Taking a deep breath, I took a step closer to where I was going to fall. Below me, I could see a busy road and many trashcans. Hopefully, I won't fall into a trashcan. When I die, I want my dignity.

 Suddenly, I heard Robin's voice getting louder. Oh God, he was getting nearer! I try to rush myself off the building but I can't. I've always been scared of heights….! But wait, what's that? I could spot my family down there, smiling and beckoning me. It's going to be all right.

 As I plunge myself into eternal bliss, something shrieked in my ears, "No, Em! I love you….!"

 What did you think? Please comment but don't be too harsh. >.<

The Mansion

Hey, this is Ili. Alright, another story. This time we decided to make a sad story.Here we go~~

There are merely words to portray the mansion for instance, huge, abandon and spine chilling or rather filthy. The paint was rather dull and the front yard was filled with dried leaves. Right across the street, a man was standing there; glaring at the mansion with sorrowfulness. He had a haunted tint to his eyes and his eyebrows crease when he knew that this mansion would be demolished within a week.

“There… is where I died,” he said. As the pedestrian walk pass through his body he looked at his hands and said “When will I be in peace… I wonder…”

Three months ago the newspaper announced the death of a man who were suspected committed a suicide. After a week later, they found out that the man was wondering around the house searching for a gold necklace that was given by his grandmother years ago. However, he accidentally tripped and mistakenly pulled a knife on an antique table and fell on the floor with a knife stabbed on his chest.

Currently, this man is lost with no hope. His soul had been wondering around with an unfulfilled dream. He somehow, forgot his own desire. The first thing that came up in his mind was the word ‘family’.

“Do I have a family…?” he said in a forlorn attempt.

Hence the man decided to went searching for his family. He barely knew his own name which was Edmund Frend by seeing himself in the newspaper with his name. What could possibly a ghost do? Alas, he determined to go searching for the family with the name Frend. He went to the grocery store and walked around the shop. He observed every person in there and suddenly…

“Jenna, don’t you feel cold all of the sudden,” said a woman to her friend.

“I do,” said Jenna.

“Don’t you think it have to do with paranormal,” said the woman.

“What’s with your thinking? Did you eat your medicine,” she shook her head and laughed to her friend.

“But… they say if a ghost pass through your body you’ll get this unusual chill,” she said.

“Cilia, don’t expect anything. Come on, hand me over that watermelon there,” said Jenna.

“I wonder what happen to my husband…” said Cilia as she gave the watermelon to her friend.

“Oh dear, I’m sorry about your husband. But it’s not like he wanted to leave you. I’m sure he’ll be proud of you,” she said.

“Not quite. I’m pretty sure Edmund would not be proud at all,” she said.

The clueless ghost was startled at that moment. He starred at the women and stood next to her.

“Is this why I got attracted to you…? Because you’re my soul mate? Am I right?" he said to her as if hoping that she could hear him.

The women who were called as Cilia drove her car to the hospital.

“Why do I still feel this weird chill,” she said and rubbed both of her palm.

She entered the hospital entrance and went into the elevator. She pressed the number three and waited as the elevator music replaced the silent instead. When the elevator door opened she walked right down into the hall and entered a room where she saw a girl lying on a bed.

“How are you sweetie?” she patted the little girl's head.

“Mom!” she hugged her.

Edmund was starring at them and almost cried.

“I think this is enough peace for me. My family… I found them… I want to live here forever… by their side,” beads of tears soaked his cheek. He went to his family and hugged them.

“Sweetie, dear, mom’s gonna go and talk to the doctor,” as the ghost turned his head towards a doctor who were standing in front of the door.

“So how’s her condition?” asked Cilia.

“She’s a very strong girl, indeed. But I believe that I have to tell you that she’s still weak,” the doctor said.


“Is she gonna die?” said Cilia.

“She will not if she take surgery,” he said.

“But I can’t afford the surgery,” she said.

“Cilia… I told you… I offer you marriage. But the last time you denied. Do it for your kid, Cilia. I myself could afford the surgery for her,” said the doctor.

Edmund was confused and he approached his wife.

“No, don’t do this,” said the ghost.

At first the woman hesitated but then she nod.

“How could you do this to me! What kind of a father am I?” said the ghost and cried.

“Cilia Denzul, I’m happy to hear your result,” said the doctor.

“Cilia… Denzul? Not Frend? Cilia. Denzul… If you’re not my wife… and the little girl is not my kid. Then… Where is my family?” said the ghost.

Happy birthday !

Hey guys!This is Aiman.I m so sorry because I late to tell you my story...I think my story not so have a good grammar.So,I had done my best for this.Actually,I m late because I have a personal technical problem.Hehehe this is story start begin.........

Today is Alberoy birthday.He is a rude boy and always play and play.He is the laziest and rudest son that his mom have.But,he has a so good brain.He always get a great score in his class although he does not work hard.He is so lucky....suddenly,

"Alberoy,I dont wanna see you breakfast in your bedroom.I think you have a done a very rude action!!Come down now!!"his mom shout loudly....

Alberoy just keep his ear close and he don't care what his mom says because he think,the most important in this world is not a rich of attitude but rich of a money.Then,the situation becomes lonely.Alberoy just keep playing but his heart still saying that something strange that happen down there...so,he go down to the downstairs.....

"Mom?hello?mom?are you there?"alberoy asking.....

He still not give up finding his mom.But unfortunately,...this situation still not give him a consent to found his mom....This thing make he conscious that how important is our mom is beside us....he crying sobbingly....... then......

"Chhhiinnggg!!!"that strange sound loudly....

"Oh my god!!!what's that!!"Alberoy shock

"hehehehe............."strange guy laugh strangely.....

Alberoy keep wondering who that guy is?with a bravely,he go toward that sound then he saw an axe that have a blood overflow around the axe!!!!!!!Situation becomes more seriously and make him becomes worried about his mother............

"you can run Roy!but you can't hide from me.hehehe........"says that strange guy scarily!!!!!!!!!!!!

"Who are you!!!don't you dare to hurt me! hey!!!!come out now!!!don't hiding from me.I know you there!!!"says that boy bravely.

"You think you so strong.....hehehe.....don't assume front of me like that!!!!!Happy birthday Roy.I have something special for you......."

That strange guy throw him a letter for a guideline to find his present....that letter says,

"In the room that you care more than you care your mom.Good Luck."

"My bedroom?he think that I m stupid like him?Hahaha......what a stupid suprised!"Alberoy says proudly.

Then he continue Babbling himself....(-_-;)

"Wait a minute?What a motive he want to give something special to me?hmmmm......I think he had kidnap my mother then he want to kidnap me?maybe......."

He ran toward to his bedroom.Then, there a happy thing happen here.He saw his mother still alive.He is so grateful to god because finally he has found her mother!!Afterward,he says disappointingly...

"Mom,...I'm so sorry because of my attitude lately...I'm promise I will not do it again.Please forgive me mom......."

The situation becomes full of sadness and tearful.Then,his mother smile without saying something because........his mom give him her HEART THAT IS FULL OFF THE RED BLOOD ON HER HAND!!

Roy shouted"ARRRRGGGGGHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

"Happy birthay Alberoy................................"Aiman replied happily.

Welcoming Death with Open Arms

 Hey, Dan here. I know I may be sort of, kind of late but.... At least I posted. :P Here's my lousy story....

 I collapse on the ground, my legs weakened. Wait, please tell me this isn't happening!  Please tell me this is just a dream, a horrid nightmare. Please tell that in a few seconds from now, I'll be awake, safe and sound with dear Vicky to keep me company. Oh God! I pinch myself hardly until my skin starts to swell but no matter how hard I keep pinching myself, I was trapped. Trapped in this cruel, cruel world. I collapse to my knees and grab a pillow from my bed. Why did this have to happen!?!

 I sulk into the pillow, releasing all the tears I had been storing all day. I still couldn't believe it! Why did my Best Friend For Life have to disappear like that!?! I should've followed her when she stepped foot over at the busy road. At least we both would have been together over to where she was now. Be it Heaven or Hell, I would have stuck with her through thick and thin!

 There was a knock at my door, "Helen, sweetie, come out please,"

 I grumble back, my voice sounding fiercer than usual, "Leave me alone, mum. Leave me be,"

 "But you're making yourself ill in your room. Please come out, Helen, you need to-"

 "Shut up! I don't need you, Mum. All I need is some peace!" I growl back, throwing a vase over at the door.

 Didn't she flipping understand the problem with my flipping life!?! My flipping friend died for flipping sake and I'm trying to remember her! Why didn't she flipping understand!?! I began throwing more things in rage at the door. I began grabbing basically anything; my alarm clock, Teddy, tissue boxes and all sorts. I felt like destroying the whole world! All of a sudden, I hear a loud yowl signaling distress and then it being cut off all of sudden.

 I stand up, wiping my eyes. My heart throbbing with fear, what was that? I warily step over to the door and gasp in surprise when I saw the chaos I had caused. There on the floor, was Fluffy, my beloved cat with a pool of blood streaming out of his mouth. I collapse on the ground, clearly shocked. Was I only able to cause more trouble? I pick him up and desperately search for his chest to expand or a heartbeat, anything!

 Nothing. No flipping anything! I drop him on the ground and begin to sob louder. I'm sorry Vicky, Fluffy, I let you down! I heard another knock on the ground, "Helen, what's wrong? Why are you crying louder all of a sudden!?!"

 "Mum, get flipping away from my room!" I grab one of the alarm clocks scattered near Fluffy and throw it hard. I begin throwing a lot more items and then realized the door creak open. And that was the exact moment when I flung a glass cup. The cup landed squarely on my mum's fore head who fell backward. I began running to her as she knocked over an aquarium which crashed into her face. "Mum! Mum!" I run over to my mum's body, shaking her crazily, "Mum, wake up! You can't leave me!"

 But as soon as I had touched mum's cold body, I knew that she was dead. But I couldn't flipping face the music. "Mum, come on, wake up and make me feel better, please!" I continued to scream, shaking her more and more.

 But nothing happened, she didn't even blink. I close my eyes, more tears stream down my face. This could not be happening! This couldn't! I break down into more tears; first Vicky, then Fluffy and now…! Why did Mum have to leave! I needed her kind and comforting words to make me happy. I needed her warm hug to frighten away the sadness lingering in my soul, "Mum, please!"

 When she didn't say a word, I hugged her tight. Even though her face was covered in blood and glass, I didn't mind. She was still beautiful. All of a sudden, I heard a soft, quiet voice, "Helen, Heeelen,"

 It was Vicky's voice! I let go of my mum and turn around. Could it be….? I shout, desperate, "Vicky, please tell me you're alive!"

 There was silence. I sulk. I knew it was too good to be true. "Helen, don't cry. I'm here for you," it was her voice again. She sounded comforting.

 "Vicky, Vicky! I won't cry, I promise just please come back!" I scream, eyes scanning wildly for her long blonde hair or her magical green eyes.

 "Hush~ Come with me, Helen," the voice was slightly louder.

 I could come with her? My eyes widen. "How, Vicky? I'm desperate! I want to see you, I want to apologize. Please take me with you, Vicky!" I continue to shout.

 I can hear a rattling noise downstairs and concerned words being spoken. Those voices outside..... They were my neighbours! They weren't going to stop me, none of them would. Vicky's voice sounded rushed as she explained, "Helen, there is something in your room. Use it…."

 I hear something fall with a 'ping' in my room. Drying my tears and smiling, I walk over to my room; heart throbbing with excitement. The people downstairs were still struggling with the door. I grin. They weren't going to stop me. As I step in my room, my eyes fall upon a regular kitchen knife lying innocently on the ground.

 Its shine welcomed me. I pick it up and mutter thanks over at Vicky. Finally, all my pain would be over and I could be among my loved ones. I hear the door finally open just as I stab myself over at the heart. Pain shot over to my body like fire but I knew it would end soon enough. And then when I finally felt my body fall limp, I smiled. The pain fluttered away just as my neighbours reach my room.

 I saw them gasp in shock and one of them muttered, "Oh Lord. Why is her skin all black?"

 I paused, scared for a moment. I felt myself slipping away from my body and immediately, I turned around to see my body, black as though burnt. What was going on? "Helen," I hear Vicky's voice and immediately turn.

 There she was, looking up at me. I smile at her, eyes full of tears, "Vicky, you're h-"

 Vicky stopped me, "Helen, hush. It's time for you to go down,"

 I blink. What did she mean? "Vicky-" I try to say before she tackles me to the ground.

 Pain rushed through my body as I crashed down, head first. Vicky held me still while I struggled to my feet. I was confused. What the hell was going on around here? All of a sudden, the floor began to crack under me. I panicked, "Vicky, please let me go,"

 Vicky just smiled sinisterly over at me, winking. The cracks began growing and then I began slipping inside. Vicky and I both fell but while I began to scream, Vicky laughed evilly. I hit the ground soon and an immense heat burned my body. I look at Vicky, plain confusion on my face. Vicky gave me a wicked smile as she said, "Welcome to Hell,"

The Killer Clown :\

Hey all ! Sorry I didn't finish this story ! I'm a bit off schedule hehe.. So, I want to say thanks to ili atiqah  for letting me join this blog ! :) I don't know how to describe this story whether it's a HORROR or COMEDY or whatever ! So, erm, feel free to comment yeah!

Here's the characters:

Elissa (Main char)

Stephan (Elissa's Lil Ex)

Sally (Stephan's Lil Sister)

       

           HERE HOW IT STARTS.....

            It's Friday night. It's almost 7:30 PM,but still no sign of daddy and mommy. They went jungle tracking at the 'DEATH MOUNTAIN' last weekend. They say they want to try to take risk. I've warned them. I did. But they still gnarly want to go. So I gave up stopping them to go there. They told me they will be back here, at home, at 5. But still, they're not home. I don't know. So I took the spagetti that my parents save it in the fridge. There's meatballs yay! So I put the spagetti with meatballs in the microwave and heat it. It was delicious. All the sudden my phone rings. Stephan message-ed me. "Elissa,could you babysite my little sister? I need to buy some stuff in the supermarket and my big sister is going out dating! Please help me :(". That's what he says in the message. Since I don't have anything to do,I guess I have to say 'YES'. So I replied the message. "Of course.". So I took my blue jeans shorts and my blue jacket and wore it. I took my favourite sneakers and took my car keys.

    I drive to Stephan's house. About 10 minutes,I've reach his house. Stephan was standing infront of his house. "Thanks so much,Elissa!" And he quickly get into his green car and drove to the supermarket which is far away from his house. Sally open the door and greet me. So Sally and I watched the TV for a few hours. I look at Sally and said "Sally,where is your brother?" curiously. "He's dating. With Angeline or something.". So he lied. Damn him. I groans a bit and stares at the TV with a scary stare. 

     *TUP!* All the sudden black out. Sally screams because she scared of darkness. I pat her and hug her so she will calm down and know I was with her. So I said to her "It's fine,I'm here. Erm,where's the flashlight?". "I don't know. Brother Stephan usually put it around the house so I don't really know. Let's call him! I'm scared." Sally answered. So I dialed Stephan's number on my phone and called him. "Stephan! There was a black out. I want to find the main switch but it's too dark. Where did you put your flashlight?" I asked. "Oh dear! hmm,It's in my room. The flashlight is in a small box under my bed." "Okay.I hope IT IS THERE!" I said. So Sally and I went up the stairs carefully and went to Stephan's room. 

      "Oh gosh! Have you ever cleaned your room?" Stephan's room was messy indeed. Socks here and there. His T-shirt's and other stuff."Hehe,nope. Too lazy to do that."she answered. I only grins. "Let's find the flash light. I don't want to stay in the dark!" cried Sally. So we both enter the room and start searching. Then I saw something. I blinked and look at it carefully while Sally is busy searching for the flashlight. "Hey Stephan. When did you bought this huge stuff toy? It looks like a clown. Cool! But kinda creepy." I told him. Amazed but scared a lil' bit. "Huh?" He questioned. "What stuff toy? I don't have any stuff toys." He answered me with a bit anxious. "Really! I'm looking at it right now! Are you trying to lie again?" "NO! seriously! I've never BOUGHT any HUGE STUFF TOY clown or somethinf! Are you getting 'the crazies'??" Stephan sounded very worried. "Elissa! I found the flash light!"cried Sally. And all the sudden the lights turned on again. "Erm,That's weird.." I said. All the sudden Sally shouted really loudly "ELISSA! DUCK!". So I duck-ed. "what?" I asked. "THE CLOWN! IT'S MOVING!" Sally answered. I was like "HUH?!" then I crawl to Sally and saw, the clown, it was moving, with an ax in the clown's hand. I think the clown is going to kill me! NO! It wants to kill us! So me and Sally screamed. 

        "ELISSA? ELISSA! Don't make a joke,Elissa! I am starting to get worried! ELISSA!" shouted Stephan on the phone. *POK!* My phone crushed by the clown. The clown starts laughing. At that time, we both run, run as fast as we can. The clown chased us. "ARGH!! RUN SALLY RUN!!" we screamed loudly. The clown throws his ax directly to us. The ax didn't hit us but it damage the furnitures in the house. GOD! what's wrong with this damn clown?! The clown able to run faster and catched Sally. "SALLY!!" I cried. "LET HER GO!!" I told the clown. My eyes can't believe it. The clown cuts Sally's head. Blood splattered. "Sally!!" I cried. The clown drops Sally's head and both Sally's head and body falls on the floor. "You...You monster!!!" I schouted angrily at the clown. Now the clown starts chasing me. "AAAA!!.." I screamed. I don't want to die! I don't want to die yet! 

      *Clacks* "Elissa?" called out Stephan. I stopped running and I forgot about the clown at the second. Without I've noticed, the clown stabbed me in the back and killed me. I saw my blood splatteres around the room and on the floor. I fell down. I'm dead. The clown took both of Sally's body and head under Stephan's room and mine too. The clown hides behind Stephan's bedroom door. "Elissa,I don't like this joke. Elissa,come out!" then Stephan went to his room and there he saw Sally's hand under his bedroom. "I see you!" Stephan giggles. But as soon as he pulled Sally's hand,he saw there's no was no head at all. He screams. And the clown took this time to kill Stephan by stabbing Stephan at the back. Fortunedly, Stephan jumps on the bed and the clown missed. The clown cut Stephan's head off. And it isn't pretty. The clown put all of our bodies under Stephans bed neatly and wipes all the blood which splatters on the walls and floor. 

      As soon as the clown finished doing that,the clown walked out Stephan's house and went to the next house and the next house to kill more people. So be careful, because he might be in your house tonight.

Elevator Level 444

Hello, this is Ili. I decided to write a horror one shot. Somehow it turned out to be worst than I expected. so... I need you to give me your opinion. Correct me if I'm wrong.

On 23rd December 2007
7. 35 a.m.
It was a beautiful day along with the birds chirping and the orchestra music echoing in my head. The temperature was just perfect and huge waves were breaking on the shore; perfect for surfing. Squirrels were running around being chased by dogs while I would lie on the bed taking this opportunity to take a quick nap. The scent of flowers that blooms in the morning was refreshing. The restaurant or more to a cafe which where I work would open at 5.30 p.m. and closed at 3 a.m. The life of a 23-year-old man who lives solitary life was just fine and filled with freedom. No girlfriend to tell you what to do and no wife to tell you what to buy and telling you to skip the football match in the middle of the night or ranted at you for putting your feat on the coffee table. Just freedom. The clouds in the sky awakened the reminiscence of my ex-girlfriend who died on an accident in the airplane on her way to Georgetown.

8.30 a.m.

“Elevator” the voice stopped “Elevator” the voice continued. It was a women’s voice but I can’t put the finger who’s is it. She kept saying the same thing and… Bam! The elevators door closed. It went up and down aggressively and I was struggling to put my feat up. The hair on the back of my neck was standing and sweats role down my spine. I heard shrikes out of no where and the button of the elevator was all out of control. It randomly blinked from number one to number five and stopped at the number four. The chaotic moment ended and silent replace instead. Slowly as the elevator door opened along with the screeching sound followed by the sound of rain pattered from the sky which generated a draughty feeling. On the other side of the elevator was pitch black and the air was heavy. I felt a bit claustrophobic. The only source of light was from the elevator. What’s this? Something soft landed at the back of my hair. Slowly as I looked up and I see… Ring! My alarm rang. I woke up from the nightmare and was gasping for air.

4.29 p.m.
I gussied up for work and walked outside the door. The condominium was always noisy at this hour. I secured my cosy house which was my only sanctuary and made sure that everything was in a perfect condition. I wore my shoes and walked downstairs and off I go to work.

12.43 p.m
As rain pattered on the window pane, I gazed upon the window. I mumbled, “Out of the blue…” I stopped, “and in spite of that, how in the world would I reach home without an umbrella,” I sighed.

3.58 a.m.
I managed to reach the building which where I lived safely. I was soaking wet. I approached the stairs and was hoping that no one would see me in this condition. On the contrary, a cleaner showed up out of no where and told me to take the elevator instead because she just mopped the stairs. “Now listen to me young man, you might fall and I’ll be blame for that. Take the elevator!” said the middle age woman. I hesitated and in the end I decided to agree with the women.

4.05 a.m.
The elevator door opened as if it’s welcoming me. I took a front step in and another one. I pushed the close button. I thought “I wanna drink hot cocoa before I went to bed”. I pushed the number six button and waited… I waited… I waited and yet still the elevator door remains shut. When I looked up… I gasped. The elevator was on level 444! The elevator stopped. From that moment, I knew that I wouldn’t get to drink the hot cocoa that I wanted, in fact, maybe forever! The door opened and I could feel the similar feeling from my previous dream.

4.15 a.m.
When I looked outside, I see nothing; it was dark. Then, I heard something… Something dragging… Drag… Drag… My heart thumped as if it’s going to pop out of my chest. And there, right over there, I saw… A hand suddenly appeared from the darkness; dragging the whole body on the floor. Drag… Drag… Something… Something… Starred at me eerily. Hair… Hair… I saw a long hair. Then, I saw a head facing the floor. Quickly as I pushed the close button. I was terrified and shivering with fear. I pushed the button rapidly but still the door won’t close. The ‘thing’ was getting closer and closer. Until it reached a few centimeters away on the other side of the elevator. I was still pushing the button rapidly. The ‘thing was reaching for me and thank god… the door immediately closed. I fell to the ground; hyperventilating. Gasp! Gasp! Gasp! I was shivering crazily. Tears were streaming from my eyes.

4.49 a.m.
I was sitting on the floor of the elevator. I felt weak like a hopeless puppy. Very weak, indeed. “I’m safe… I’m safe,” I thought. Then, I felt something soft at the back of my hair. When I looked up… I saw… I saw… A corpse with a scary face glaring at me while ‘it’s’ hair landed at the back of my hair… “Please… Please… Have mercy,” I cried. The thing shoved its hand; reaching for me. “Have merc-….”.

On 30th December.
The newspaper came out. The police station was getting busy and busier. A policeman went to his friend and said “Hey Fred! Find anything?”. “Nah, I don’t have a clue at all. But, it says here that the man was on his way to his home and suddenly vanished,” answered Fred. “I wonder what happened...?”

The reason

First thing first, you can call me Ili. I am the founder of this blog. I'm just a middle schooler who loves to write one shots. My friends and I which are Danial, Amira and Aiman decided that we would like to unleash our talent right here. ^^ We are not word painters but we'll try as much as we can to create such stories. Thanks~